为李清照改词

声声慢
朱曼华

欢欢喜喜，
热热闹闹，
说说笑笑嘻嘻
霜叶红透时候，
最忆黄菊
一行人字飞雁，
人爱它，长空无语
秋去也，谁伤心？
决非旧时相识。
满山枫林摇曳，
叶无损，
或许有人采摘。
独守青山，
暗恋斜阳西去，
残荷轻敲细雨，
声声诗意。
那次第
怎一个乐字了得！

附
李清照
<声声慢>

寻寻觅觅，
冷冷清清，
凄凄惨惨戚戚。
乍暖还寒时候，
最难将息。
三杯两盏淡酒，
怎敌他、晚来风急？
雁过也，
正伤心，
却是旧时相识。 .

满地黄花堆积。
憔悴损，
如今有谁堪摘？
守著窗儿，
独自怎生得黑？
梧桐更兼细雨，
到黄昏、点点滴滴。
这次第，
怎一个、愁字了得！

Slow-Melody
Tr. Manfield Zhu

To seek and seek again in vacancy,
I feel lonely and lonely,
chilly and chilly, gloomy and gloomy.
It’s getting warm but still cold;
Keeping fit for me is difficult.
Two or three cups of light wine
Could stop speedy wind at night?
The flying wild geese in line
Became old friends of mine,
Having me heartbroken with a sigh.

The ground full of flowers in yellow,
The withered were wan and sallow.
Who would like to pick?
I had to guard my window,
How lonely could I stay after dark?
The umbrella-like leaf against drizzle-blow,
Drop-by-drop at dusk,
Such a series of clicking note
Could be generalized just by ‘sorrow’?”